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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Break Your Addiction to Uncyclopedia
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| rdfs:comment | - Hey I havent written a lot lately, but a review would be nice. 08:13, June 22, 2011 (UTC) I've got this, it'll be ready in 2 days maximum. I'm also addicted I'm afraid, my solution would be to throw my PC out the window. 00:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC) I'm not through, Frosty, I'll send you a message when it's done. 20:03, June 23, 2011 (UTC) Now it is done. 23:13, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
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| Mcomment | - I don't need to give a reason.
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| Icomment | - I think you should consider opening the article with a pic to the right that would present the article in a lulzy way. Suggestion: a pic of a junky injecting himself where it is written Uncyclopedia on the syringe, along with a lulzy caption. Make the pic big if you add it, like 300 px.
The weakest pic is the second one in my view. You could add one with a totally fucked up person, a bit like this one, with a funny caption. If you think it sucks, Qvfd it:
thumb|left|250px|Before and after using Uncy.
The other 2 are great.
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| Ccomment | - The concept is awesome, and very topical: after all we all are dependent lol, and the casual readers of the site will think, it's true, this site is addictive. So it's good all the way.
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| Fcomment | - I think when you take care of the damning "addict" thing repetition, the article will improve a lot. I suggested a lot of things to help, but it doesn't mean to do exactly what I say, take the concepts/sentences you find funny, trash the rest. In other words, don't blame me if it sucks LOL. Nah, I don't think it will suck if you follow my suggestions and add some stuff of your own, the key is to spend time on it.
Sorry I don't say often "good job" in my Pee Reviews, it's because I guess people want to know what needs improvement, not a 500 word compliment. I enjoyed it, but you can improve it, Snowman! It's a good thing you decided to write. I hope it helped, tell me when you think you're through polishing it, I may help some more.
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| abstract | - Hey I havent written a lot lately, but a review would be nice. 08:13, June 22, 2011 (UTC) I've got this, it'll be ready in 2 days maximum. I'm also addicted I'm afraid, my solution would be to throw my PC out the window. 00:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC) I'm not through, Frosty, I'll send you a message when it's done. 20:03, June 23, 2011 (UTC) Now it is done. 23:13, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
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