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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/General Tso's Chicken
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| rdfs:comment | - Phrank Psinatra 04:43, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
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| Mcomment | - Your scores have been averaged. Should have a few more links to other articles throughout though... I might fix that after this review.
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| Pcomment | - The trilogy could be restructured/rearranged a bit so we know that you're talking about 3 different standards of chicken right away. Perhaps even a line or two of introduction in that subsection would work. Perhaps move the "Tso's Chicken Alternatives" section down the page farther to serve as a relevant introduction?- I, a grammar nazi, didn't notice severe grammatical/spelling mistakes in the article, which is good. :D
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| Icomment | - The fortune cookie one is a must for this article. I feel like the drawing is a weak addition- replace with a picture of a stereotypical asian restaurant owner serving General Tso's "Chicken" possibly as the picture of the creator??
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| Ccomment | - It's something I wouldn't have thought of- using the sauce as an antiseptic/rocket fuel. Possibly has the potential to be added to as long as it doesn't become stupid. Marking the creator as an immigrant living in the US was a good move .
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| Hcomment | - The jokes are there but they're not "lololololololollooll oh crap that's funny *wets pants*" type of funny. Could be better if they're not rewritten with too much bigotry.
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| Fcomment | - Not too bad of an article and I hope to check back on it sometime in the near future.
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| abstract | - Phrank Psinatra 04:43, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
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