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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Gollum
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| rdfs:comment | - Pilkster 15:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
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| Mcomment | - I just averaged your score. The redlinks were a bit distracting as i was reading it. I might clean those up after I'm done here though.
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| Pcomment | - I really don't see any problems with the prose/formatting and I'm a Grammar Nazi.
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| Icomment | - I burst out laughing when I saw the first picture and its caption. Second is fairly appropriate as well. A couple more pictures with decent captions would really hit the spot though, preferably if they were edited LOTR pics with appropriate captions.
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| Ccomment | - The idea that Tolkien and Gollum were users and abusers of many things is an interesting concept and perhaps could be expanded upon?-just don't overdo it to the point of it being stupid. Personally I'd like to see some more Lord of the Rings references and content woven into it.
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| Hcomment | - Overall I'd say it's okay. I feel that the 3rd paragraph in "movie deal and rise to fame" needs to be tweaked- I love LOTR so I know who Viggo Mortensen is but will other, not so devoted readers?
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| Fcomment | - All and all, I enjoyed reading this article and I look forward to any future updates made.
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| abstract | - Pilkster 15:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
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