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rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/League of Legends
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rdfs:comment | - Saddex (talk) 23:06, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
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Pcomment | - Please get it proofread. "Of some reason" should be "For some reason."
*Quite a few more English errors as well.
*It gets a bit list like near the end.
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Icomment | - *The first two images are great.
*In the second image I cannot see the numbers you are refering to so please crop the image.
*More images further down the page are needed.
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Ccomment | - You know your stuff and there is plenty there.
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Hcomment | - Like the humour behind the hatred of the game. Hating a computer game is a common article and theme on Uncyclopedia however this is done well on your article.
*I personally don't find the David Turley comment funny but then I do not know who he is.
*A lot of nonsense creeps into the "History" section that tells a story more than encyclopedic facts.
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Fcomment | - Please remember I have never heard of this game. It was funny so you covered that point. The article was very long which I have no problem with but I couldn't sit there reading to the end as I hate reading gaming articles. That's not your fault at all. From what I did read properly it looked very good. Perhaps get another user like Simsie to read the rest as they probably can stand gaming articles better than I can. Sorry, but good work and please keep going. Your final score shows a decent Uncyclopedia article with a bit to improve on .
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abstract | - Saddex (talk) 23:06, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
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