| abstract | - Okay, I've taken care of every problem you cited except for more pictures, and that's only because I have no equipment with which to upload pictures. Still, I trust you'll agree that I met most of your conditions? Will you be willing to restore the article to FA status now? Erik Pflueger File:Republic Emblem.svg 02:45, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* We'll go over all the articles in this batch next Saturday. - Lord Hydronium 02:56, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* Sorry to spring this on you, but we forgot to list the Personality and Traits section requirement. - Lord Hydronium 02:59, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* Pardon my intrusion, but I'll add some more images in a moment. KEJ 19:26, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* Done. I've also uploaded some images that might be useful for the personality section on the article's talk page. KEJ 21:05, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* Personality and Traits section, huh? Well, that's a new one. I never added to one of those before, so engrossed was I in the biography sections of pages I worked on. I'll just have to grope my way towards something, and hope it works for you. Just to throw some cuteness into this, if you remembered it late, does that mean you'll extend the deadline to account for it? ;) Erik Pflueger File:Republic Emblem.svg 21:25, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* I second that. Oh, are you going to write it, Erik? KEJ 21:29, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* If there isn't a P/T by Saturday, I'll bring that up and see what the others think about it. If everything else is up to snuff, I'd support giving it a week extension for just this. - Lord Hydronium 21:53, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
* I had assumed that I would, KEJ, since the article is pretty much my handiwork, but the fact is that I don't know how to do so in the way that I know how to write in the main body of an article. If anyone wants to jump in to help me, please feel free. Erik Pflueger File:Republic Emblem.svg 01:07, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
* I was hoping you would write it, since it's a great and well-written aricle, which deserves to regain its fame and fortune. I hope my I've done an acceptable job with the images - there aren't that many to chose from, since he only appeared in three short, comicbooks stories. Anyway, I don't have much experience with personality-sections either. The only one I ever wrote became a miserable failure, and I'd probably ruin the article. KEJ 01:15, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
* I like the images a lot, KEJ, and I know there isn't much material to work with. That's why I'm overcoming my regret that there are so many dialogue baloons in them. At least they're clean, sharp and bright. I would only ask that the original main picture be restored, but I understand why you changed it: your version had a better and closer view of Valance's face, complete with cybernetic enhancements and fake skin peeling like pizza cheese. I understand all that; it's just that there's those baloons in it, and aesthetics compel me to ask that that one change be reversed. I'm happy with everything else. I hope you're not offended. Erik Pflueger File:Republic Emblem.svg 04:00, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
* Feel free to change it back. I do think, however, we should keep the "cheese-and-terminator" image somewhere in the article. I'll leave it up to you. I'm afraid I won't have much time to work on Wookieepedia the next couple of weeks. KEJ 23:32, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
* Well, gang, I've added what I presume would be the start of a personality and traits section, though there's far more "personality" than "traits" in it, I'm guessing. If that's not sufficient to meet your requirements, then I'll just have to accept the page being stripped of its FA status. If you think you can help it, though, please add to it as you see fit. Erik Pflueger File:Republic Emblem.svg 00:46, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
* They decided to keep it. I changed the pictures around after all. I hope you approve of it. KEJ 13:25, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
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