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* Star of Iskin — Valorum has been shown alive in The Lost Ones, which apparently is 20 or 19 BBY and thus overrides the Star of Iskin's existence.
* Let's not be too hasty. Valorum's appearance in the episode does not mean the Star of Iskin never existed. I've added a brief BTS note and included the template, which should suffice for now. Grand Moff Tranner File:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 17:16, March 29, 2014 (UTC)
* Jedi Temple Guard - Updated needed.
* Just a note that the above two articles are affected by TCW Season Six, which will not have been out for a month by the time the meeting rolls around. We can discuss them at the meeting, but if we take our usual clause of waiting a month before probing for updates, then these shouldn't be probed until after April 7 (one month after the U.S. release). CC7567 (talk) 17:16, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
* Jilruan - Update needed.
* Unidentified duck individual - Must now be fully referenced. Most likely needs a general cleanup to reload infobox, update linking, etc. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:07, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
* Tracer - infobox-exclusive info. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:48, March 21, 2014 (UTC)
* Fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:43, March 22, 2014 (UTC)
* This article also needs an Equipment section. See Warthog. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:13, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
* Added. Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:23, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
* Gwarrk - I feel like the P/T should discuss the royal regalia that he wears, like the crown, necklace, spear-thing that he carries around, and whatever else might not be visible from this article's images. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:21, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Mentioned it, but I kept it pretty vague, as we do not know what it is and what for it is. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:26, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* CT-65/91-6210 - This article is a mess.
* Sourcing. For starters, there's an unsourced paragraph. Secondly, the article needs to provide specific referencing for the dates 22 BBY and 19 BBY. For example, this sentence cannot be entirely sourced to Deviss's CSWE entry: "In 19 BBY, Deviss served in the raid of the Separatist-controlled Colonies world Cato Neimoidia." That sentence needs specific referencing for 19 BBY, "Separatist-controlled" and "Colonies world." Moreover, this article needs to employ CSWECite. The article also needs a specific source for the Order 66 context. The Nem Bees DB entry cannot be used a source for this claim: "an order for all clone troopers to execute their Jedi officers"
* Sourced all dates, events and other stuff and employed CSWECite. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:57, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* BTS. The BTS is incomplete, and I think its information is poorly presented. Please refer to the Bly Databank entry as a model of how it should be written. The BTS needs to mention the fact that the red Bly was the basis for a Hasbro action figure (a 2005 Clone Commander figure, according to The Ultimate Action Figure Archive), since that corresponds to Deviss. I think the BTS should also clarify that the Grand Army article was written for a specific Insider issue, and the date of its publication should be mentioned. This sentence doesn't even make sense "...and appeared briefly in the sourcebook Galaxy at War." The character is pictured only. This doesn't even need to be mentioned in the BTS. It's trivia. In short, this section could use a complete rewrite.
* Added the Hasbro figure stuff, clarified the info about the Insider article and removed the mention of Galaxy at War. Please let me know if you want any further changes. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:18, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Missing source. The Sources list is incomplete. For one, this article should look into whether the "red Bly" 2005 Hasbro action figure should be listed. But more importantly, there's a Deviss figure from the 2009 Legacy Collection line, which isn't listed here. And that brings me to my final point.
* Added both action figures to the sources. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:11, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Equipment. This article should designate a specific Equipment section to discuss Deviss's armor, weapons, and equipment. That information does not belong in the P/T. This will likely require a significant expansion from the missing Legacy Collection Deviss action figure, as he comes complete with some kind of other weaponry/equipment. This info can be found on Rebelscum.com. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:13, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Added new equipment. I hope the way I sourced the rebelscum-stuff is correct, as I was unable to find a "Cite" for Hasbro sets. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:32, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* The Hasbro cite template is the same template you added to the Sources list. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:55, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* (Facepalm). Changed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:02, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Shadow Three (Kadavo) - at the very least, needs a Bts note stating that the character was not included in the television series' adaptation of the story (which is overall treated as canon).
* Shadow Five - same as above. CC7567 (talk) 04:33, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Crys - This article should make an effort to work the mention of his clone trooper armor into an Equipment section. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:05, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Created an equipment section and removed the armor stuff from the P&t. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:06, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
* Ray (creature) - Sourcing issues: Specific references are needed for mention of Naboo being a Mid Rim planet. This entire sentence in no way can be sourced to the CSWE ray entry: "Both the Gungans and Humans, known as the Naboo on the Mid Rim world, considered the ray an excellent sportfish, as it put up a strong fight and often made spectacular leaps from the water." And it seems we can definitely put another image in the body, probably from the Republic 69 comic or perhaps from the film itself. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:49, March 26, 2014 (UTC)
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