*That's a keeper. --Under_user/sig3 (08:40, Jul 5)
#Did some careful edits. imnho the page is actually very good if read from a certain point of view. Even the numbers create a surrealistic atmosphere, and the page has some very clever lines and concepts. I mention in my edit captions that editing should be done very carefully, like a surgical operation, because of its balance, and that is the best way I can describe it. Aleister 21:39 24 6 MMX
*Six all after a week? That's a keeper. --Under_user/sig3 (09:39, Jul 1)
*See my recent comments on "performance art" articles. A prude might be someone who likes censoring things; so this article censors things. I personally prefer funny writing to the crutch of using , and especially overusing it; I thought it was trite in one section of Barack Obama and is triter here. But the article "does what it sets out to do." Subtle pokes would be better than heaps of scorn. SPIKE/signature(04:00 1-Jul-10)