About: dbkwik:resource/B91b1qbW0MJaLex8QITWvg==

Property	Value
rdfs:label	A Cautious Edit
rdfs:comment	From: [[]] ' [Find the rest of the story at ]
dcterms:subject	Manuscript Page Potential
Success title	Omit needless words
Failure title	Little improvement
Game Instructions	This can improve a work whose Potential is 25 or less - and very occasionally, a little more than that.
BroadDiff	25
Failure description	Sometimes you feel like a driver trying to turn a hackney-carriage in a crowded street, encumbered by shouts and jeers and disrespectful horses.
From Card/Storylet title	The Writer's Desk: rework!
Unlocked with	,
Rare Success description	Sometimes every word drops into place with the ivory click of fortunate dice. This won't increase Potential above 45, though.
Rare Success title	The fortunate fall of a phrase
Success description	A gentle pruning, just enough to let your flowers see the sun.
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abstract	From: [[]] ' [Find the rest of the story at ]