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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnTunes:I Am The Very Model of a Crazy Fundamentalist
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| rdfs:comment | - God... i'm all written out. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE say it is feature worthy. Now i'm off for a holiday or something. --Moneke 13:19, 8 January 2008 (UTC) ok a couple of quickies:
* Inside my mind all you will find's a tal-muddled Koranium .... maybe 'muddied' instead ?
* Yes i know the slant is aimed toward eastern culture...but seriously, most of those verses could apply to christian fundamentalists as well, couldn't it? I'm not suggesting a re-write, but I do think my suggestion of having the image tweaked (sea IComment above) is a thought. Or hell, if you added a verse that was strictly 'christian flavored' that would work as well. Im not saying you have to, but in my head, i was thinking "too bad this is EASTERN centered...it would have been PERFECT if you had verses that pertained
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| Mcomment | - You have achieved a rare thing, you have gotten the highest score from FINNIUS that has ever been awarded. Pat yourself on the back, my friend.
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| Pcomment | - Prose and formatting were fine. I went thru LOOKING for spelling mistakes...all was good. The only negative comment i have would be rhythm, but honestly, almost every verse is very very close to being 'on mark'...and for the sake of musical parody. SEA-BELOW for a couple of MINOR edits.
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| Icomment | - Ok here was my ONE real complaint...currently your image shows the entire work to be slanted slightly christian. My suggestion is that you also have a CHRISTIAN BOMB flying towards an EASTERN flag/mosque...WHATEVER..there should be NO FAVORATISM towards one 'fanatical' group or the other..I think it would be much more poetic to see that !!
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| Ccomment | - Just like the old days of 'mad' and 'cracked' magazine...There is nothing like honest-to-god parody to produce a smile.
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| Hcomment | - This was great. It was the first review of my day, and you made it a NICE day for me. I had the theme song running in my head the entire time i was reading your lyrics...BY GOD, we need to get this recorded by SOMEONE and put the mp3 Link on this page...SERIOUSLY...if you know a choir or school chorus that can do it..hehe IT should be done...seriously.
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| Fcomment | - I WILL be putting this up for VFH immediately! I usually dont do that, and make a suggestion that the writer self-nom...but I will be taking a more active role in 'behind the scenes' stuff from now on, and will be voting, cleaning up, etc.
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| abstract | - God... i'm all written out. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE say it is feature worthy. Now i'm off for a holiday or something. --Moneke 13:19, 8 January 2008 (UTC) ok a couple of quickies:
* Inside my mind all you will find's a tal-muddled Koranium .... maybe 'muddied' instead ?
* Yes i know the slant is aimed toward eastern culture...but seriously, most of those verses could apply to christian fundamentalists as well, couldn't it? I'm not suggesting a re-write, but I do think my suggestion of having the image tweaked (sea IComment above) is a thought. Or hell, if you added a verse that was strictly 'christian flavored' that would work as well. Im not saying you have to, but in my head, i was thinking "too bad this is EASTERN centered...it would have been PERFECT if you had verses that pertained to ALL the major current theologies"... AH WELL, I cant have everything..lol
* Even if NO CHANGES are made at all, this is a FINE FINE work. Thank you for putting it up. I enjoyed it.
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