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| rdfs:comment | - Crazyhair911 03:06, January 23, 2011 (UTC) Okay, I'll go for it. This is me first pee review, so I'm just going to give you my complete humble opinion. -- 23:17, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
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| Mcomment | - Perhaps read HTBFANJS. It might help with the humor.
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| Pcomment | - Looks pretty good here. The bulleting and the equation give it a nice look. Maybe put the "How Gotan made the world" a part of "About Gotan". That makes more sense to me. And remember to capitalize the links in "See Also". It just makes it look nicer. Adding a few more sections wouldn't hurt, if you think up some more things to write about.
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| Icomment | - I LOVE these images. If you made them, then you did a spectacular job. As I said before, you could add one or two more, but it's not too important. The pie chart I thought was really good. Excellent work here.
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| Ccomment | - Yeah, this is a really great topic. I think things like this have a really good chance of being VFH.
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| Fcomment | - Work on the humor, and take advantage of the great topic you have. You can talk to some more experienced writers about humor, since I consider meself a n00by n00b. Just keep going. The article's not bad at all. Good lucke!
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| abstract | - Crazyhair911 03:06, January 23, 2011 (UTC) Okay, I'll go for it. This is me first pee review, so I'm just going to give you my complete humble opinion. -- 23:17, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
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