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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Fear
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| rdfs:comment | - Morning all. Let me know what you think. Unless you think it's shite. In which case I will eat your children. Unholysmoke 09:09 17 Aug
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| Mcomment | - Not sure it needs the British template, to be honest .
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| Pcomment | - It's too listy. A list or two is fine, if you have a few paragraphs of solid prose to back it up. The emotional breakdown bit would work better as a paragraph with more explanation, for one.
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| Icomment | - I like the pie chart breakdown, that's good. The other one seems less relevant.
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| Ccomment | - I quite like the basic idea, but it really needs work.
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| Hcomment | - Some nice lines in there.
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| Fcomment | - Not shite , but not great either. Could do with more fleshing out, and some descriptive prose. There's room for descriptions of the various types of fear in greater depth, maybe the history of the term , and so forth. Basically, it's not a bad start, but needs significant expansion. Go for it!
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| abstract | - Morning all. Let me know what you think. Unless you think it's shite. In which case I will eat your children. Unholysmoke 09:09 17 Aug
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