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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Jocke Pirat/The Last Question
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| rdfs:comment | - I have not included the UNIVAC operators manual. Ignore this for now. 8/11/2007 @ 03:13
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| Pcomment | - I cleaned up a bit.
Tip #1: Get FF. It's got a built-in spellcheck . The grammar checker from Word is a bit better, but you need Word to use it. Word costs money.
Tip #2: Simpler is generally better. While being complicated can work , unnecessary words can end up ruining the flow of a page. See these? Two fairly minor changes helped to smooth out a couple of bumps.
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| Icomment | - It's got them, and they work, for the most part. For :Image:UNIVAC Fast Food.jpg I'd recommend that you move the Happy Meal box to the middle of the pic and crop the sides off the image. As it sits now, the people and the food don't catch the eye.
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| Ccomment | - Spoofing lit is not done nearly enough, IMO. Or, it is and I simply haven't been paying attention. Lose the self-reference bit. Talking about Uncyc in a page that isn't about Uncyc draws the reader away from the tale .
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| Hcomment | - Vaguely amusing. That may sound a bit harsh, but I haven't read the original Asimov tale. So why am I pee reviewing this, you ask? Because you put the call out on IRC. So you get what you get .
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| Fcomment | - A competent page based on something I know nothing about: books. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going back to reading my compendium of Hugo short story winners.
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| abstract | - I have not included the UNIVAC operators manual. Ignore this for now. 8/11/2007 @ 03:13
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