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| rdfs:comment | - Please review my new page Hunter, Thank you. -333pet 17:07, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
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| Mcomment | - I'd like to see a bit more about each animal, and more animals.
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| Pcomment | - Formatted properly. Definitely needs work on spelling and grammar. You might want to write your articles on your computer ahead of time so you can do a spell check. You might also check out Uncyclopedia:Proofreading Service.
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| Icomment | - Really good pictures. Make the deer one larger.
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| Ccomment | - A good idea, having the article about animals hunting people. Doing it this way has allowed you to describe all kinds of interesting methods animals use to hunt humans.
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| Hcomment | - You do a good job of using the encyclopedic tone to describe the "facts" about hunters. I liked "due to increases in the human population hunting has picked up in recent years." The different ways in which animals fool humans is funny, especially rabbits luring us with their cuteness. I also like how porcupines justify hunting humans by eating their trash.
I think you need a bit of work on the intro to make it funnier/more appealing. Often people will read the intro, but stop reading if it doesn't hook them into wanting to read the rest of the article. Then, under Bears, "you only have to outrun the other guy running from the bear." I guess you could keep it, but I've heard it before, a bit of an old joke. Finally, the trivia needs work - I'd take out the one about humans being stupid and add a few others.
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| abstract | - Please review my new page Hunter, Thank you. -333pet 17:07, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
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