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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Orissa
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| rdfs:comment | - Tattoo 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
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| Pcomment | - This is the section that DEFINITALLY needs the most work. Your quote introductions are simply WAY too many, and improperly formatted. You honestly do not need 7 made up quotes, I would say that 3 is more then enough. To properly format quotes, use this…
You also ran into quite a lot of other problems, “If they get pissed from this article”, for example, is not correctly written. You also do not have a single blue link in this entire article and you do not have a single category. Categories are placed by pressing shift, and placing {{
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| Ccomment | - Making up a town and writing a satire article might sound easy, but frankly, it isn’t. you have to explain what the article is about, write a satire, jab out false information, and give a straight face throughout the entire article. I understand that you tried, but it was not exactly taking satire to its highest.
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| Hcomment | - Not meaning this too harshly, but you definitely need to read HTBFANJS and look at the Featured articles. To me, a 5 is not funny, but not pointless. Frankly, this article bumped into pointless. I understand that the first article is the hardest to write, and it will take effort before your articles make front page, so don’t take this too harshly.
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| abstract | - Tattoo 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
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