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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Get a Life
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| rdfs:comment | - I'm claiming this one! -- 16:04, 11 July 2008 (UTC) Auk 15:40, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
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| Pcomment | - This lets the article down, to be honest.
Formatting and Links
:The format is OK, but it's a bit dry - apart from in one section, it's all just single paragraph sections. You've got plenty of links going on to it , though the links in the article are perhaps a bit lacking. For instance, you could link "pants are important also" - it helps to make people laugh at the concepts of the article.
:My other gripe is the use of italics and bold as emphasis - it's good, but it's not consistent, which just irritates.
Spelling and Grammar
:Spelling is not too bad, though there's a few petty annoyances - for instance, a lack of capital letters .
:Grammar-wise, I found it really frustrating. For guidance on quotes, see this review for a start at least.
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| Icomment | - The images are good, entertaining, with reasonable captions. For a longer article and a better score you'd need to have more pictures; perhaps before and after pictures are a good one, or testemonials from people who got a life.
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| Ccomment | - It really should be funny - it's inherently a great concept. How often do we say, in jest or otherwsie, "get a life"? What do we mean? That's the joke you're trying to get at, but it's what's not quite hitting the target.
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| abstract | - I'm claiming this one! -- 16:04, 11 July 2008 (UTC) Auk 15:40, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
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