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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Code Lyoko
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| rdfs:comment | - -KW- 01:31, 26 February 2008 (UTC) And now, a bit of a counterpoint, for the sake of balance. Please don't take what follows as me being nasty, just an attempt to give you an idea of how things work around here. This isn't a great Uncyclopedia article as it stands, and I'd have scored it lower, I'm afraid. Have a look at HTBFANJS, please. And UN:LIST while you're at it. We try, around here, to write articles that aren't just lists with a lot of random content and memes in them. Also, it helps if an article is understandable to those not familiar with the subject, as well as those who are.
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| Mcomment | - Code Lyoko is definitely an article to pay attention to.
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| Pcomment | - Formatting seems to get me a little lost on the article.
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| Icomment | - The images and the captions on it tells a lot of awesome jokes. Well done!
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| Ccomment | - I used to be a fan of Code Lyoko. I want this article because it is accurate. The French do more anime then surrendering.
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| Hcomment | - The article is funny, but please make it so the plot still has some truth in it.
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| Fcomment | - Code Lyoko IS a world without danger...I think.
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| abstract | - -KW- 01:31, 26 February 2008 (UTC) And now, a bit of a counterpoint, for the sake of balance. Please don't take what follows as me being nasty, just an attempt to give you an idea of how things work around here. This isn't a great Uncyclopedia article as it stands, and I'd have scored it lower, I'm afraid. Have a look at HTBFANJS, please. And UN:LIST while you're at it. We try, around here, to write articles that aren't just lists with a lot of random content and memes in them. Also, it helps if an article is understandable to those not familiar with the subject, as well as those who are. Now, that's not to dismiss this article completely. The formatting is fine, it's not badly written, and there's an obvious knowledge of, and love for the subject matter shining through. But a lot of the article is quite random, and there's not a huge amount of consistency on show. So here's my tip: re-write this to be more of an explanation of the show - discuss themes, spend more time on the characters and the overall feel, and less on listing stuff with a couple of lines of random stuff. HTBFANJS will help with this - it has helped many of our finest writers improve immeasurably. And a good look at some featured articles should give you a better idea of what to aim for. Now please don't take this as a massive knock back - lots of people started here writing worse stuff than this, and went on to improve massively. Think about this, and do some more work on it. If you want more help, this is a list of people happy to help. Find one you like the look of (and who's got recent stuff on their talk page so you know they're still active) and ask them - they're a good bunch, and can give you loads of tips if you want. I hope I've kept your feet on the ground here without discouraging you. If you think I've been harsh, please ask on my talk page, and I'll try to give you more constructive feedback. I'm only trying to help, believe it or not! -- 14:43, Feb 26
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