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| rdfs:label | - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:Give Up
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| rdfs:comment | - Started out with me and Unknown user but ended up just being me. Read the GUIDELINES and give me a GOOD REVIEW, DAMMIT!!!!111!1!!1 (Dec 20 / 04:17) Well considering i started it, i might as well review your work-- 02:19, 22 December 2007 (UTC) Dam these guys have had WAY too much XMAS sprint this year! The generosity is killing me! I'm not tight with my scoring am I? Bah Humbug... You can strip it down a fair bit more if you ask me Cajek. There is still some dead wood in there in my opinion. 21:06, Dec 22
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| Mcomment | - This article is fun, smart, and humorous. I guess it doesn't need to much work. Good job.
- Freakn' awesome. Avged it.
- This article is fun, smart, and humorous. Just organize your funnies. But good job.
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| Pcomment | - Very well formatted. I noticed 1 or 2 mistakes with your/you're, but other than that, good job.
- I would have written it as a personal memoir in a scholarly tone, but you don't have to do that if you don't want to. Make it seem like Herman Melville is there writing an article full of his "subtle, yet blatant use of symbolism" . I agree with maddmax: You know what you need to do.
- You must know what prose is. Also, it is formatted well enough.
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| Icomment | - Loved the raptors!! And the PUPPIEZZ!! But it needs that picture of that frog in the bird to really complete it. Maybe someone can chop it so that the frog ends up dying "because he didn't give up".
- Very nicely done. My favorite is the cat hanging on to the string. That was gold. Good job.
- Good images. I especially like how the puppy is cute, and your kind of thinking, "hey, i'm cute!" and then you see the raptor and your like "Shit, I'm dinner". Charlie Brown is good, but not as funny.
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| Ccomment | - 6.31152E7
- I like the concept. A valuable addition to the site. The only reason that I didn't give a 10 is that this article was bound to show up, whether you wrote it or not. Just a little too expected. But good job.
- I guess this is a good concept. It is pretty fair, funny, and such. It's not as funny as the cat and toast and flipping upside article, but it's good.
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| Hcomment | - Good humor. I like the tone of the article a lot. I also think that the velociraptors are cool, and that the content is pretty solid. I would, however, like to see more sex in this article. Okay? Also, there should be some references to why Jesus wants you to give up , a Russian reversal, and maybe an Oscar Wilde quote. Those are important.
- You really aced this part!!-I couldn't come close to making nearly as many great punchlines in one sections as you did! But here are the parts I was going to include if you had let me write it
- Good humor. I like the tone. However, I feel that the humor is sorta pread out there a bit. It's there, but it's not there. In other words, it's a little scattered. But good job.
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| Fcomment | - Word. You told me to give up, but I ain't that dull. your article rocks, but I ain't no cull. You emit super rays, but I've got a hard skull. In terms of grammar errors your meter was null!
- ...I gave up.
- You really killed this one!!! YOU FUCKIN' KILLED IT!!! In a good way, though! (Soo close to writing it...so many ideas...soo close...).
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| abstract | - Started out with me and Unknown user but ended up just being me. Read the GUIDELINES and give me a GOOD REVIEW, DAMMIT!!!!111!1!!1 (Dec 20 / 04:17) Well considering i started it, i might as well review your work-- 02:19, 22 December 2007 (UTC) Dam these guys have had WAY too much XMAS sprint this year! The generosity is killing me! I'm not tight with my scoring am I? Bah Humbug... You can strip it down a fair bit more if you ask me Cajek. There is still some dead wood in there in my opinion. 21:06, Dec 22
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