| abstract | - I've been working on this one a bit, but it's kind of an odd article... there's a lot of non-canon concept art of Atris, and a lot of cut material, so that her Bts looks bloated. So I'm looking for suggestions, plus general feedback. Thanks :) Sarendipity Talk File:Atrissig.jpg 04:42, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
* I reworked the word choice in the first body paragraph, worked to better detail the Kotor II encounters with the Exile, and reworked a bit of the image placement (which includes in-game screenshots, uploaded by Sarendipity). Is it more satisfactory now? Or is there more to do? -Solus (Bird of Prey) 19:24, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
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